Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Revised Script


I wrote this script, I had to cut it down from the original in-order to match the time restraints. Some lines were changed but nothing was added.


This was my post about the revised script from the third quarter submission, however some changes need to be added. Unfortunately, I do not have access to the same resources I had at school, therefore I am posting this revision in a different format. 


What should be added to the end of the script: 

FADE IN

GIOVANE IS LAYING ON HIS BED ASLEEP, HE IS ALONE

G: *wakes up and sits up* I can't do this

GIOVANE IS NOW LOOKING AT HIS COMPUTER FOR ADVICE

G: *On the phone* Hey man, you still want that candy?

ALTO IS ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE LINE

A: *Sighs and hangs up putting phone down*

G: *Looks at phone with disbelief, sets phone down and looks discouraged*

FADE TO BLACK


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